Note to readers: "Long Gone" is a new short story that I started today. I have a feeling that it'll be a lengthier one, so I've decided to divide it into parts and post each section as I write it...like a live screening of the story's eventual creation. The second part will be up sometime this week, so stay tuned!
Part 2: http://paintedexistance.blogspot.com/2015/12/long-gone-short-story-part-2.html
Part 2: http://paintedexistance.blogspot.com/2015/12/long-gone-short-story-part-2.html
Amelia Richard Jameson was not a
recluse. She was bright, energetic, compassionate, artful in conversation, skilled
at reading faces. She could blend into a crowd, yet thrust energy into it,
simultaneously. She could drone on about a subject with passion, or at times,
listen thoughtfully, quietly, contently. She knew how to smile sweetly, laugh
outrageously, frown understandingly. No one who ever met the 20-year-old
college student disliked her. In fact, most would agree that she was the
kindest, most generous acquaintance they knew. Everyone consented that Amelia
Richard Jameson had a bright future ahead of her. And she deserved it.
So when her roommate Becky finds
the bedroom door locked, she assumes Amelia had fallen asleep. Finally trying the
“coffee nap”. When a friend invites Becky to dinner, she consents. Forgetting
all about Amelia still asleep in the bedroom.
Around 11 pm, Becky returns
home. Boy does she have a lot to tell Amelia. Jack Meyers, the cute guy from
history, finally asked her on a date. She knows what Amelia will say, cross
legged on the sofa, “It’s about time. You’ve been making the first moves all
semester.” And then they’ll laugh, munch on popcorn, each melting in the sweet,
warm, fuzzy beginnings of romance.
“Amelia, guess what?” Becky’s
voice is sing-song, happy, infatuated with fresh memories of her night.
The door is still locked. “Amelia,
I know you’re not still napping. Open up dear.”
No sound.
“Amelia?” A hint of concern creeps
into Becky’s vibrant voice.
“Amelia, this isn’t funny. Stop joking
around.”
Around 11:30, Rebecca (Becky) Marie Amerson
phones the campus police. “My bedroom, it’s locked. Uh, my roommate, she’s
locked inside.” Quivering voice, confusion, denial, typical symptoms of shock. Of
a sudden shift in emotional state. Of an unbearable weight slowly descending
upon her body. “Hold tight, sweetie. We’ll be there shortly.”
Phone call ends. Connection
ceases. And Becky Marie Amerson is alone again, sitting cross-legged, back
against the locked bedroom door, willing herself not to imagine what is on the
other side.
But those who cling to ignorance,
when it is long gone, turn themselves into monsters.
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